I am delighted to post a very nice review that was sent to me by Dr. Yitzchak Enav (Winehouse), a noted lecturer and scriptwriter.
"I just found your delightful story: a lovely variation on Hamletian indecision and its devastating consequences. It has something very Jewish rather than Israeli about its tone. Yudale's procrastinations remind me of the Yeshiva Bochar dithering between two interpretations of a text, or the wondrous piece of dithering on the part of the protagonist in the film Chinese Take-Away. Terrific stuff!! Send me more ! Publish!"